About me: Im 23 and Im going to school for nursing. I changed my major and Im glad I did. Eventually I want to be a Pediatric Nurse Practitioner. I love kids they are so fun and I enjoy them. I also like trying new things. My long-term goals would be to learn how to sail and ski. I would eventually like to travel all over the world. Some of my likes are soccer, alternative rock and Latin music, and sushi. One thing I would say I don?t like about myself is that I can be shy at first, but I warm up.
What I think makes a successful relationship work (besides trust because that is so obvious) is to be friends first. When you are friends you can really get to know each other and its good to take things slow. Another thing is to keep family and friends out of relationships because they can complicate things (I learned that the hard way). Also lastly, but not least is communication and listening these go hand in hand. I also hate to argue it doesn?t solve anything.
What I value in a guy is humbleness, a big heart, a sense of humor and adventure. I know there isn?t a perfect guy out there and that?s okay no one is perfect. It?s a plus if a guy can cook that impresses me. What I can say I don?t like in a guy is arrogance that is a big turn off for me. I like to date other ethnicities.
Thanks for taking the time to read my profile. 
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Overall it sounds pretty good. A couple of minor comments:
1) You say you like to date other ethnicities…but you don’t say which one you’re from. Also, are you excluding guys from your own ethnicity? It’s not clear.
2) The word is “humility”, not “humbleness”. Not a big deal, but it might turn off a very literate guy. Also, “I’m” instead of “Im”, and watch your apostrophes becoming question marks, and consider adding some punctuation to your last couple of sentences to break them up a little.
3) I’d divide up your first paragraph a little, moving the last two sentences into a new mini-paragraph. It makes the first one much neater.
4) This may sound a little cynical, but you might want to include a description of yourself physically – hair color, height, your best feature (smile, face, legs, etc).
5) Do you live at home? In a dorm? Could be an issue, especially since you mention family in your profile.
6) If you want to make your profile longer, try describing your ideal first date – it will take a lot of pressure off the guys asking you out, and you know you’ll be more likely to enjoy yourself.
7) How about your friends? What do you like to do when you’re just hanging out with them? That’s something you’re likely to end up doing with your boyfriend, too, after a while.
Good luck!
Wow!. you sound like ypive been through so much allready!. ..
That is soo sweet!. Awww.lol.
thats so cool that you want to ski!. wow! you sound like a really out going energetic person! you acctually sound quiet similar to me . i cant argue. I just dont see the need in it.
And that bit about keeping family and friends out of relationships??
Preaching to the quire!. lol. defo!
Can i just say a perfect guy tho?
They say beauty is in the eye of the beholder
Its the age old question.
is there such a thing as a perfect guy
can I ask. Where are you from>?
ill leave you with this beautiful qoute which I think is very fitting
No man is worth your tears, but once you find one that is.. he wont make you cry.